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	<title>TalysMana &#187; 1: The Story</title>
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	<description>Between lightcross and shadowcross, Story awaits...</description>
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		<title>List Crash</title>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 30 Dec 2011 17:25:11 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Holly</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Becky and I both thought the other had the list taken care of. It was going to her, but she&#8217;d changed her email address, which meant she didn&#8217;t receive the renewal notice. So she&#8217;s now putting the list back together again.  Both our apologies for the crash. If you receive a request to rejoin the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p></p><p>Becky and I both thought the other had the list taken care of. It was going to her, but she&#8217;d changed her email address, which meant she didn&#8217;t receive the renewal notice.</p>
<p>So she&#8217;s now putting the list back together again.  Both our apologies for the crash. If you receive a request to rejoin the story list, it really is from us.</p>
<p>Holly</p>
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		<title>Computer issues</title>
		<link>http://talysmana.com/423/computer-issues/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 10 Jun 2011 16:13:53 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Holly</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[My two-month old computer suffered a catastrophic screen failure about two weeks ago.  For the past two weeks, I&#8217;ve been struggling to put together the How To Think Sideways Walkthrough from my laptop, with all the material I had on the main computer unavailable while it was in the shop.  And, as noted elsewhere, the [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p></p><p>My two-month old computer suffered a catastrophic screen failure about two weeks ago.  For the past two weeks, I&#8217;ve been struggling to put together the How To Think Sideways Walkthrough from my laptop, with all the material I had on the main computer unavailable while it was in the shop.  And, as noted elsewhere, the migraines and vertigo are back with a vengeance.</p>
<p>The current version of TalysMana was in the other computer&#8217;s backups, which I cannot mix with the laptop backups.  So no words for me, other than putting together the How To Think Sideways Walkthrough.  The computer is back now, though, and I&#8217;m getting ready to set it up again and put all the data back on it.</p>
<p>Hoping things will be less eventful from here on out, and I&#8217;ll be able to get more on the story soon.  The villain and I were having such an interesting conversation.</p>
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		<title>Next Chapter</title>
		<link>http://talysmana.com/419/next-chapter/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 30 May 2011 03:12:20 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Holly</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Doing an interlude with the villain.  Ugh.  Got his philosophy tonight.  467 words in twenty minutes.  I&#8217;ve heard this guy in various guises in the real world, and I didn&#8217;t like him or his view of the world any better on my pages. But he is what he is. How about you and your words?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p></p><p>Doing an interlude with the villain.  Ugh.  Got his philosophy tonight.  467 words in twenty minutes.  I&#8217;ve heard this guy in various guises in the real world, and I didn&#8217;t like him or his view of the world any better on my pages.</p>
<p>But he is what he is.</p>
<p>How about you and your words?</p>
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		<title>Finished &#8220;Laying Bait&#8221;</title>
		<link>http://talysmana.com/417/finished-laying-bait/</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 24 May 2011 02:51:46 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Holly</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Only got 240 words today, but I&#8217;m back at the story again, and I finished the chapter &#8220;Laying Bait.&#8221;  I love this chapter, and at the same time I think it&#8217;s going to be one of the ones that requires the greatest revision. I&#8217;ll post it tomorrow.  I&#8217;m still running behind on my stuff for [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p></p><p>Only got 240 words today, but I&#8217;m back at the story again, and I finished the chapter &#8220;Laying Bait.&#8221;  I love this chapter, and at the same time I think it&#8217;s going to be one of the ones that requires the greatest revision.</p>
<p>I&#8217;ll post it tomorrow.  I&#8217;m still running behind on my stuff for the How To Think Sideways Walkthrough and need to work on that for a couple hours more.</p>
<p>How about you?  Any words?</p>
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		<title>The Dog Ate My Homework?</title>
		<link>http://talysmana.com/414/the-dog-ate-my-homework/</link>
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		<pubDate>Fri, 20 May 2011 17:28:32 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Holly</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I was rolling along beautifully.  Getting the words written, getting the How To Think Sideways walkthrough put together, getting the NovelWritingSchool.com site running&#8230; And the single piece of new technology around which I&#8217;d built the Week Four Walkthrough, putting hours and hours into lesson setup and demonstration, died on me.  Second time I used it. [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p></p><p>I was rolling along beautifully.  Getting the words written, getting the How To Think Sideways walkthrough put together, getting the NovelWritingSchool.com site running&#8230;</p>
<p>And the single piece of new technology around which I&#8217;d built the Week Four Walkthrough, putting hours and hours into lesson setup and demonstration, died on me.  Second time I used it.  Brand new thing.  Dead.</p>
<p>And with it, an entire week&#8217;s work went down the toilet, and I had to figure out how to completely redo everything while recasting it into a different format.</p>
<p>Hell of a week.  I have no new words to report.</p>
<p>Hope your words are coming better.</p>
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		<title>Exploring Why We Create</title>
		<link>http://talysmana.com/412/exploring-why-we-create/</link>
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		<pubDate>Tue, 17 May 2011 16:13:34 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Holly</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Yesterday I got 320 words in twenty minutes. Today I got 321 in ten. Some days are just better than others. But I like the conversation I&#8217;m building between Will and Kettan and the gathered Spinners. They&#8217;re talking about creation and destruction, and about why individual creation matters&#8212;and to WHOM it matters. There&#8217;s too much [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p></p><p>Yesterday I got 320 words in twenty minutes.</p>
<p>Today I got 321 in ten.</p>
<p>Some days are just better than others. But I like the conversation I&#8217;m building between Will and Kettan and the gathered Spinners.</p>
<p>They&#8217;re talking about creation and destruction, and about why individual creation matters&#8212;and to WHOM it matters.</p>
<p>There&#8217;s too much dialogue right now&#8212;I know that. But if I stop letting them just talk to each other, and start creating background action, I&#8217;m going to lose the thread of what they&#8217;re saying. So first draft on this part is going to be pretty straightforward talking heads.</p>
<p>I may end up going back in revision and splitting the conversation up across scenes or whole chapters. I&#8217;m not sure.</p>
<p>First, I just have to hear what they have to say&#8212;so that&#8217;s what you&#8217;re going to get in the first draft.</p>
<p>How are YOUR words coming?</p>
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		<title>Laying Bait</title>
		<link>http://talysmana.com/411/laying-bait/</link>
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		<pubDate>Thu, 12 May 2011 16:32:40 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Holly</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[Yesterday was toast. My schedule was jammed from wake up to wipe out, and I did not have a single ten-minute interval that was not filled with something I had to get done. Today I got 304 words. Not in ten minutes&#8212;took me nearly twenty, but this was the start of a new chapter (LAYING [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p></p><p>Yesterday was toast. My schedule was jammed from wake up to wipe out, and I did not have a single ten-minute interval that was not filled with something I had to get done.</p>
<p>Today I got 304 words. Not in ten minutes&#8212;took me nearly twenty, but this was the start of a new chapter (LAYING BAIT) and I had a hard time finding my entry point to it.</p>
<p>It picks up just after the last chapter left off. I&#8217;m still iffy on what I got, but it&#8217;s the right number of words, and it&#8217;s progress. And there&#8217;s always revision.</p>
<p>How&#8217;s your work going?</p>
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		<title>Planning</title>
		<link>http://talysmana.com/409/planning/</link>
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		<pubDate>Wed, 11 May 2011 03:24:07 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Holly</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[No words to claim, but significant word on the outline cards for the next couple of chapters.  I have a pretty good idea where I want to go&#8212;nice to know after having been gone so long. How did you do?]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p></p><p>No words to claim, but significant word on the outline cards for the next couple of chapters.  I have a pretty good idea where I want to go&#8212;nice to know after having been gone so long.</p>
<p>How did you do?</p>
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		<title>The Few, The Proud</title>
		<link>http://talysmana.com/403/the-few-the-proud-2/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 09 May 2011 14:01:09 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Holly</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[542 words today. I got sucked into finishing the chapter that I left hanging ages ago. It flew, and I was so glad to be back in the world of Talysmana. No time to say anything else today&#8212;I still have to get all the Monday work done on the walkthrough. But The Few, The Proud [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p></p><p>542 words today. I got sucked into finishing the chapter that I left hanging ages ago. It flew, and I was so glad to be back in the world of Talysmana.</p>
<p>No time to say anything else today&#8212;I still have to get all the Monday work done on the walkthrough.</p>
<p>But <strong>The Few, The Proud</strong> went into the chapter delivery hopper today&#8212;I didn&#8217;t realize I&#8217;d left something so close to finishing. Sure made it easier to get into the story again.</p>
<p>How&#8217;s your writing going?</p>
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		<title>A pause, and a temporary shift in gears</title>
		<link>http://talysmana.com/401/a-pause-and-a-temporary-shift-in-gears/</link>
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		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Nov 2010 01:34:15 +0000</pubDate>
		<dc:creator>Holly</dc:creator>
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		<description><![CDATA[I apologize for being gone. As you might have guessed, I&#8217;ve been dealing with headaches, and have missed a lot of work.  I&#8217;m way beyond playing catch-up&#8212;everything I had scheduled is going to end up moved back by months. And Becky has run into a scheduling problem, and won&#8217;t be able to devote much time [...]]]></description>
			<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p></p><p>I apologize for being gone. As you might have guessed, I&#8217;ve been dealing with headaches, and have missed a lot of work.  I&#8217;m way beyond playing catch-up&#8212;everything I had scheduled is going to end up moved back by months.</p>
<p>And Becky has run into a scheduling problem, and won&#8217;t be able to devote much time to TalysMana for a while&#8230;so I&#8217;m putting the story on hiatus again, this time until the beginning of next year.</p>
<p>Write A Book With Me is going to leap over to my writing diary for a while&#8230;it&#8217;s going to have to be a sort of &#8220;Write Short Stories, Write Bonus Lessons, and MAYBE Write A Book With Me&#8221; deal for a bit.</p>
<p><a href="http://hollylisle.com/writingdiary2/index.php/2010/11/14/back-to-fiction/">First WABWM post is over at the writing diary now, though</a>.  Join me there for a while, and we&#8217;ll come back here when Becky is ready.</p>
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