Comments on: If you’re reading TalysMana, please read this

By: Claudette

Claudette — Fri, 23 Jul 2010 23:50:04 +0000

Holly,

I have to tell you, if you’re first drafts are as chaotic as mine, I can understand why a reader-only would think of it as disorganized and in need of the trash can. Been there and know what you’re talking about. I’ve just thrashed the first 3 chapters of my fantasy again because it occured to me that I have to start the real story much further along.

Go to it, girl. Write as you need to and for those who don’t get it, it’s only because they’ve always admired writers, never been one.

Clauds

By: Patricia

Patricia — Thu, 11 Feb 2010 04:31:20 +0000

I would have never guessed that was a first-draft! Good job!

By: Eliza

Eliza — Mon, 08 Feb 2010 17:55:22 +0000

I remember you explaining this to us at the beginning of this venture. I think it is both inspiring for me, and brave of you, to make Talysmana available like this. I, personally, am thrilled to be seeing it take shape from the ground up. And you deserve thanks, not petulant criticism.
So- Thank you!